The claims prompt that we can usually learn from much more like-minded people those whose views contradict our own because disagreement can cause tension, demotivation and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because different people may have disparate opinions and supports on the given topic. Some of them go for the topic, while others can't agree with it at all. I both agree and disagree with the given claims that we can usually learn from much more people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own. There are two reasons and examples supporting my position are presented in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, when people think about the general welfare, then their minds come to good education, good health, free from political involvement, great happiness, and so on. In additional, general welfare plays most important role in the upbringing any country. For instance, I have taken two countries Switzerland and Myanmar. In case, Switzerland there are better education, better health, no political pressure in anu people, High standard living style, and great happiness in each people. However, in Myanmar, there is a worse education system, weak political system, low standard of living style, and so on. Hence, welfare is required to make a great nation.
However, for the development of any country, there must be good rules and regulations, artists and Scientists. if the rules and regulations of any country are not good, then that country is not developed properly. Moreover, in that country people are free which may increase the crime rate that's why for development better rules and regulations are required.
Furthermore, Scientists play an important role in developing any country. For example, Myadam Curie was the greatest scientist and she developed radiotherapy for the treatment of cancer that's why scientists are the most important part of making a great nation.
In summary, the reasons and examples presented both support and contrast the given claims/positions. The essay highlights the surest indicator of a great nation is the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists and the general welfare of all its people. The examples of Switzerland and Myanmar, and Myadam Curie illustrate to support or contrast the given claims.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... of them go for the topic, while others cant agree with it at all. I both agree and ...
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...ere are better education, better health, no political pressure in anu people, Hig...
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...education system, weak political system, low standard of living style, and so on....
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...nd regulations, artists and Scientists. if the rules and regulations of any countr...
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... free which may increase the crime rate thats why for development better rules and re...
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...adiotherapy for the treatment of cancer thats why scientists are the most important p...
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...upport or contrast the given claims.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34699453552 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79484158382 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516393442623 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3567011656 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233794681516 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070962958088 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138600595372 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127559777239 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110502509578 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.