The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
The narrator wants to say that the indicator of great nation is not represented by the achievements got by their artists,rulers or scientists , but the indication of the great nation is represented by the general welfare of its people. I agree with the speaker that welfare of the people is the only thing which responsible for the recognition as a great nation. The achievements of the artists,rulers & scientist may attract the attention of the many countries but before that they should be good with people.
The welfare of the people is the most important thing which take the nation to be called as great nation. The achievers should be good with the people around them when they are working.We see many nation has many achievers but the fact that they are not as good as with he people around them or they they should not has that general welfare of its people .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , rulers
...by the achievements got by their artists,rulers or scientists , but the indication of t...
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Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ot by their artists,rulers or scientists , but the indication of the great nation ...
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Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , rulers
... nation. The achievements of the artists,rulers & scientist may attract the attention o...
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Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he nation to be called as great nation. The achievers should be good with the peopl...
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Line 2, column 140, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...tion. The achievers should be good with the people around them when they are working.We see many natio...
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Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...eople around them when they are working.We see many nation has many achievers but ...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun nation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many nations'.
Suggestion: many nations
...round them when they are working.We see many nation has many achievers but the fact that th...
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Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'with the people'?
Suggestion: with the people
...t the fact that they are not as good as with he people around them or they they should not has...
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Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...ct that they are not as good as with he people around them or they they should not has...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
...s good as with he people around them or they they should not has that general welfare of ...
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Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ple around them or they they should not has that general welfare of its people . ...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t has that general welfare of its people .
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that general welfare of its people .
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'may']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226993865031 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.128834355828 0.157235817809 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0981595092025 0.0880659088768 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0306748466258 0.0497285424764 62% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0736196319018 0.0444667217837 166% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.159509202454 0.12292977631 130% => OK
Participles: 0.0245398773006 0.0406280797675 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71340757078 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0122699386503 0.030933414821 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.134969325153 0.0997080785238 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245398773006 0.0249443105267 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0245398773006 0.0148568991511 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 873.0 2732.02544248 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 452.878318584 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63225806452 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.58838876751 77% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.303225806452 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2 0.280924506359 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122580645161 0.200843997647 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116129032258 0.132149295362 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71340757078 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 219.290929204 31% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438709677419 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 33.3303332123 55.4138127331 60% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.380412469 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1252027024 59.4972553346 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.6 141.124799967 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 23.380412469 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.94800884956 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.0 51.4728631049 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.76315789474 1.64882698954 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.669555319205 0.391690518653 171% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.309277774004 0.123202303941 251% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0629213417014 0.077325440228 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.78790974292 0.547984918172 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.100463048799 0.149214159877 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.461026510976 0.161403998019 286% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195040455588 0.0892212321368 219% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.624395110394 0.385218514788 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0692045440612 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.570986559428 0.275328986314 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182127900792 0.0653680567796 279% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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