The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
It would be obscure to define the great nation. There are various factors and criteria's which would be heavily debated if we discuss the greatness of nation. As by general view great nation constitutes of people of class from penury to elegant class, where each entities compliment each other and gives peace growth of nation. The nation constitutes of people of all origins around geography of country stick to each other in time of crisis, natural calamities.
It is well know fact that, it is general people's who are the backbone of the every economies around the world for any nation. As from gas station to the governmental jobs, there are general public who work monotonously towards growth of the nation. If a slight change in day to day work it will surely lead to raucous effect on entire nation.
It is the people who work, cherish and support the growth of nation. Once general people are happy with basic necessities it will lead would surely lead to surely nation. Other-way round if the people are deprived of basic amenities and services, it will forcefully lead them to move to accomplice way to get this things which in turn will affect the harmony and social status of the nation. To prevent such things taking of care general people will always should be first preference.
It would be unfair to call rulers, artist or scientist's contribution in overall nation growth or progress, but it would be tinge in comparison to contribution added by general people. If consider the fact that even this high graded people were also general people sometime before, the fact they are basic requirements were met and they were able to grow more in respective field. It would be nice if high graded people work for betterment of general folks which eventually will add give us assurety of good nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: CONSTITUTES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
...nation. As by general view great nation constitutes of people of class from penury to elegant ...
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Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: CONSTITUTES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
...ives peace growth of nation. The nation constitutes of people of all origins around geography ...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...isis, natural calamities. It is well know fact that, it is general peoples who ar...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ion to the governmental jobs, there are general public who work monotonously towards growth of...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...otonously towards growth of the nation. If a slight change in day to day work it w...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...erish and support the growth of nation. Once general people are happy with basic nec...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ion. Once general people are happy with basic necessities it will lead would surely lead to surel...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rcefully lead them to move to accomplice way to get this things which in turn wil...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... them to move to accomplice way to get this things which in turn will affect the ha...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253731343284 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.146268656716 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113432835821 0.0880659088768 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0417910447761 0.0497285424764 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.044776119403 0.0444667217837 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125373134328 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0179104477612 0.0406280797675 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.43808732535 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0417910447761 0.030933414821 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716417910448 0.0997080785238 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0388059701493 0.0249443105267 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0208955223881 0.0148568991511 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1816.0 2732.02544248 66% => OK
No of words: 312.0 452.878318584 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82051282051 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36858974359 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233974358974 0.280924506359 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.102564102564 0.200843997647 51% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0833333333333 0.132149295362 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43808732535 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 52.2058593227 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2857142857 23.380412469 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5581813387 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.714285714 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 23.380412469 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 45.6831501832 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.70512820513 1.64882698954 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382419732209 0.391690518653 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13544197097 0.123202303941 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0693979313531 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575251296097 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.11874011539 0.149214159877 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17841212991 0.161403998019 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887367740335 0.0892212321368 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.406082722562 0.385218514788 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0502093660547 0.0692045440612 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280078449389 0.275328986314 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511013951432 0.0653680567796 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.