The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A nation is nothing without its people and its success is also determined by them. Be it a denizen’s personal achievement or an accomplishment that helps the society, both fuel the nation with pride. Indeed, a nation’s success is defined by the achievements of its people and not merely by the happiness and satisfaction of the denizens.
When the denizens receive encomiums and are lauded for their efforts in various areas, the nation takes pride in that. Take for instance the Indian cricket team that has reached the apogee of success. Surely the nation feels proud of it even though such an achievement does nothing to help the people of India like overcoming indigence and illiteracy. This is not only true in the field of sports, but also in other fields like art and music. The artists prepare their work keeping their ethnic background in mind and deliver something that appeals to the current generation. If there work becomes popular and is viewed by millions of people around the world, then surely such an artist has made his or her nation proud and at the same time won the hearts of not only the natives but also the international audience. However, this effort by the artist does absolutely nothing for helping the natives or mends any existing problems they are facing. Hence, a nation can be viewed successful and can take pride in the achievements of its people even though they do not contribute towards the betterment of the society.
In some cases, achievements of a person are inextricably linked to the welfare of the people. The scientists who work day and night in trying to formulate new antidotes, vaccines and treatments for debilitating diseases that might be pervasive in the society not only add gold points to their list of accomplishments but also help the society immensely. Similarly, a ruler’s achievement in the past to let’s say uplifting the women in the society, or for constructing a bridge that greatly enhanced trade thereby improving the economic conditions of the people, can also be viewed as accomplishments with the denizens reaping the benefits of it. Therefore, achievements and the benefits people get from it should not always be considered as two separate entities.
Nonetheless, there are cases when the success of a nation is measured in terms of the satisfaction and happiness of its people. Places like Netherlands and United Kingdom are hailed for providing free healthcare to all its citizens. Lowering cases of ailments and better access to healthcare services are seen the prime indicators of the success of a nation. The achievements of let us say an artist or even an archaic ruler might not take precedence when we talk about the most important aspect of the success of these countries.
In sum, even though welfare and betterment of the society are important determiners of the success of a nation, the achievements of a few denizens are equally important especially if their accomplishments help people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nonetheless, similarly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2508.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 497.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.046277666 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9280265424 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478873239437 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.662613922 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.4 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.85 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146891276498 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539085619091 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470218008911 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100647798228 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388056316116 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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