There are more than 200 nations existing in this word. Some of them are geographically great, some of the are literally great, some of them are technologically great , some of them are papulationally great and some of them are economically great. Besides these ,there are some tendency to allocate nations as overall greatness of nations applying the some indicators value like literacy rate, happiness index, per ca-pita income, health conditions of people etc. So, the greatness of nations depends on various factors. Here we have to understand the fact that people are in central attraction. All of the indicators apply or measured from general people. Making long story short, the health conditions, literacy rate , economic conditions, happiness index, entertainment of primary rights of general public will determine the greatness of the nations.
We all know that the nation is the group of general people in a certion geographic boundary, lead by ruler and law. The basic and invatiable factor of nations is general public. The artists, scientists , and ruler are only small group among the general public whose main responsibility is to serve the public according to their ability and authority. So, here comes the great questions, if ruler , scientists and artists only got achievement in their lifestyle and personal growth but besides them all general people are poor and unhappy, how can be the nations great? If the people became rich, happy and healthy, obviously the higher class people's status will increase. It is because, their main source of income is the credit-ability of the general people.
We can take reference from world's atlas. The country like USA, Canada, Australia, European Countries, Japan etc are said to be great country. People of the rest world wants to be settled over there. Why? It is because, these countries are very much concern about the welfare of of its general people. If we see closely to these countries people, they have equal opportunity in world class education, they have good health facility, they have opportunity in doing job according to their ability, they are entertaining equal laws as ruler groups, they have good credit-ability to enjoy on latest technology etc. Another good aspect is they are happy to pay tax and ready to spend their money in entertainment, which will ultimately good source to survive rulers, artists and scientists. Likewise, we can take example of Syria, Somalia, Afghanistan etc. In these country, the rulers, artists and scientists are above the poverty line and most of the people are below the poverty line. The people are facing war. Not only this, literacy rate is very low, health indicator is very low, most of the people are unhappy with rulers. So, these countries cannot be counted as a great even if its rulers, artists and scientists are getting more achievements.
If one says the rulers, artists and scientists are the representative sample of large population. I say them, yes they are but you cannot judge the whole population by studying these samples. According to the rule of sampling, these are restricted sampling, restricted sampling never can give accurate research results. If we want to see the greatness of nations, the ruler should have to make welfare law and order in the country, the artists should represent the voice and demand of the people and the scientist should have do research about public concern. The era of 21st century is so far democratized, no any nations can be great without concerning the general welfare of its people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, likewise, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2976.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 583.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10463121784 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71771502233 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469982847341 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 939.6 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7002630368 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.620689655 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1034482759 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.03448275862 5.21951772744 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303397803622 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782017175367 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742384623279 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18095960066 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254110539632 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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