Although mankind are social animal, they have their own individual life. Each peoplea have different interest, hobbies and capability. If they are free to utilize their own innovative ideas to grow up their interest they can get profound achievement in related field. Once they achieve the targeted goal according to their interest, it could be beneficial to rest of the world. I strongly believe the fact that people should have to focus on their own intellectual interests for personal reason to make beneficial to rest world.
Personal intuitions are the mother of all research and the innovative ideas. Excluding few, most of the inventions and theories derived in the world were initially not for public well being. Indeed, these all were derived from personal interests. For example, Sir Issac Newton did not do the research in Gravitation Law on apple for well being of human kinds. Initially, he started his experiment to satisfy his curiosity. Later when he got success, that theory became fruitful to all rest of the world. Likewise one author write books for express his hidden talent, one movie maker makes good movie for money and popularity, one professor do research on lab to broaden his academic career etc. The good thing is that, most of the time their efforts of pursuing their personal innovation spread some positive vibes in the society.
Restrictions and limitations bind the limit of creativity. If someone have to do some thing for other people, he have to be in certain limitation. Every time he will have to aware about the negative consequences. Most of his worth time, he have to spend for making his work/task unambiguous. Finally, his innovative ideas will shaded by many circumstances. There will be chance of getting less satisfaction and less public laudatory words. For instance, one movie maker is going to make a charity film for society in the name of social awareness. He has a given condition that movie must be socially acceptable. That means he is not totally free to use his creativity. It is because the new idea may not digest by the classical audience. There will be still possibility of disliking the movie by post modern audience. If his movies do not get popularity as expected, it will be so bad for us. Neither he got self satisfaction on what he did, nor the audience got benefit.
Individual freedom is the best ground for growing the tree of innovation. Public interest and expectation are like hailstone who tend to destroy the growing tree of innovation. If that trees got proper space , time and blooming environment, it will give us sweet fruit.So, I want to request all that to get a sweet fruit, please give them to grow.
Making long story short, personal interest give birth new ideas, theories and inventions which will be ultimately useful to all human kinds. The interest of serving people creates pressure to anyone because it create the limitations and high expectations. In most of the cases, the high expectations and limitations will limit the flow of innovative ideas, creations and theories. By repeating the statement that most of the success-ed people in the past did their job with using their personal interest first, I want to end my essay agreeing that people who pursue their own intellectual interests for purely personal reasons are more likely to benefit the rest of the world than are people who try to act for the public good.
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- In any given field, the leading voices come from people who are motivated not by conviction but by the desire to present opinions and ideas that differ from those held by the majority. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 68
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...erent interest, hobbies and capability. If they are free to utilize their own inno...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive ideas to grow up their interest they can get profound achievement in related ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...came fruitful to all rest of the world. Likewise one author write books for express his ...
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ind the limit of creativity. If someone have to do some thing for other people, he h...
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Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...it of creativity. If someone have to do some thing for other people, he have to be in cert...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...e to do some thing for other people, he have to be in certain limitation. Every time...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...onsequences. Most of his worth time, he have to spend for making his work/task unamb...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'shade'
Suggestion: shade
...ous. Finally, his innovative ideas will shaded by many circumstances. There will be ch...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...novation. If that trees got proper space , time and blooming environment, it will ...
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Suggestion: So
...nvironment, it will give us sweet fruit.So, I want to request all that to get a s...
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Suggestion:
...t will give us sweet fruit.So, I want to request all that to get a sweet fruit, p...
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...e creates pressure to anyone because it create the limitations and high expectations. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...greeing that people who pursue their own intellectual interests for purely person...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, likewise, may, so, still, well, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2841.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 576.0 442.535393258 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93229166667 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67310446416 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501736111111 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 896.4 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0987093188 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0909090909 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331483276303 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711455074024 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113986793577 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193464434975 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132657367723 0.0667264976115 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 100.480337079 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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