A great nation is indeed build up with the welfare of its people but for a nation to grow and for the welfare of its population, we have to look for the extol the achievements given by the contributors such as scientists, artists, etc.
India is one of the great democratic nations with the highest population in the world. The Government indeed take care of the welfare of the nation but its success comes from the achievements of its people. For example, India was ruled by so many emperors like Ashoka the Great and Akbar. They ruled India for many years and brought peace among people. Ashoka, widely known for promoting Buddhism among people for meditation and peace of mind. Akbar, being a Mughal emperor, brought peace by tantamounting Hindu and Muslims. The sacrifice given by these rulers, enhanced the mentality of people to make peace among the country by not living based on religions.
Scientists are one of the noblest people among all, which plays a major role in the enhancement and development of a nation. Comfort and happiness come when people are provided with new technologies and these new technologies are invented after so many experiments and hard work given by these scientists. For an example, Delhi is the capital of India and invention of Metro in the capital has played a major role in the welfare of people by accessing them to travel from one place to another in less time and money. The Innovation of metro is a part of science and technology.
Artists, they have played a major role in keeping history live in all over the world. Artists help people to exchange emotions and feelings through their art and when people connect with each other emotionally they build a great nation. It is very common in India where people keep paintings related to history because these paintings well described how emotionally people are attached to their motherland.
Conclusively, it can be asserted that a great nation is built when there is love, peace among people but in order to grow with time numerous contributors such as scientists, artists play a major role in the development of country because without them a country can’t grow and if a country won’t grow, its people won’t also grow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'builded', 'built'.
Suggestion: builded; built
A great nation is indeed build up with the welfare of its people but f...
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Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... of its population, we have to look for the extol the achievements given by the contribut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88976377953 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64255065536 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46719160105 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.396078744 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4375 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207679543453 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714840677774 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103814126673 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133935883681 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105755657845 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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