The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
The speaker contends that the indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people. Admittedly, the general welfare of its people represents the economic boom of a nation, achievements of its artists are also crucial for a great nation.
People's welfare is one of the most important indicator of the prosperity of one nation. Because only when a country is economically developed, it can pose importance on people's well-being. Take, for example, the nations in Scandinavian Peninsula where marginalized people like LGBTQs, illiterates and women can share the same rights and respect as mainstream white males. Even President Trump regard countries like Finland and Sweden as dreamed paradise in which people are more inclusive and never judge others because of their color or sex. The reason behind the utopian life in Northern Europe is that residents there are relatively wealthier than most other nations in the world and thus the government has enough cash to pay a large amount of money on education and public facilities like museum and art galleries so that citizens living there are more educated and tolerant.
However, the achievements of artists can also represent the great spirit of a nation. For instance, those avant-garde film directors in the French New Wave like Varda created thousands of masterpieces which can still overwhelm cinephiles all around the world. Watching those brilliant cinemas, audience can feel the sense of liberty and the quest for dream. Take the film Breathless as an example. When the protagonists running in the Palace Louvre, they laugh and they run as hard as they can. That is life with passion, soul of liberty. And that is exactly what French are chasing for centuries from the French Revolution to the protest nowadays against monopolies and corrupted government. Thus, the core spirit can be shown in the works of artists of that nation.
In addition, achievements in the field of art and literature can represent the unique characteristic of one nation. The reason why the American people strived for their literature works after the establishment of the United States was that they recognized that new Americans did not have a particular identity which differentiated themselves from Europeans. And from reading works written by native writers can residents find their own identity. Giants like Edgar Allan Poe and Mark Twain gradually established Americans' own characteristics- open, optimistic and adventurous by creating novels like The Fall of the House of Usher and The Adventures Huckberry Finn. Those masterpieces are totally different from the tedious European counterparts and are remarkable of the use of dialects and laconic style.
In a nutshell, achievements of artists can represent the spirit of a nation and cultivate a nation's unique identity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 91, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...nt the spirit of a nation and cultivate a nations unique identity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2464.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29892473118 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89345708171 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8287170464 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262249764637 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905993398358 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179175570927 0.0758088955206 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200548808472 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.245465929799 0.0667264976115 368% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.