Teacher is the one of most significant works of human beings, while whether the teachers' salaries should be based on the academic perfromance of the students they taught does not make sense in that the definition of teacher is in a very large scale which should not be evaluated in a single criterion like the students' academic archievements. On the other hand, the teachers should be benefited in some ocassions when their students made success in the field ther are.
To begin with, as the definition of teacher is so vague that we should discuss this essay in several groups by age levels of the sutednts as well as some other standards accpepted by most of us, given that not every teacher is focusing on the academic fields like the coachs and masters in sports area. So let's start from the basic education in primary and middle schools where the academic performance rarely discussed. However, the teachers' salaries can be evaluated in other method likewise. As the overall students in the test and the popularity among students are all the feasible criterions for the performance of teachers. Moreover, the popularity among students is not merely suitable for the children or teenagers at schools but also for the old ones because of the personalities or teaching skills are welcomed by all of the students no matter how old they are.
For instance, in new oriental schools, the biggist private foreign language agency in China, there are so many famous teachers who can teach English so well by the means of their humorous personality as well as the excellent guidance in learning. Lots of people educated in this place benefited a lot from the teachers, and indeed , the teachers' salaries are based on the popularity and teaching skills.
Let't go on with the students and teachers in the Universities and Colleges, there is another case for the teachers here as some of them are not only teach students but also focusing on researching with students. At thie level of students, they are likely to know where they should study and what should be guided by the tutors. Some of them would make significant research in the major, thus under the guidance by their tutor, the tutors should be rewarded instead of being paid as the method of spiriting both of them. If all of their salaries are based on their students' academice performance, maybe it will bring about serious competetions among students as welll as students which violated the nature of learning and teaching. I agree with the award rather than related-salary that could be a proper inspriation to the teachers. In this way the acadamic phenomenon will be confotable and healthy.
In addition, as I would like to make clear of this essay by differentiating the teachers, there are some special teachers even they could not make academic reseach, they are also the topic of this essay. For instacnce, the coaches in sports, an athlete runner is always guided by the his/her teacher, when the runner get famous, the coach got celebrated, too. Or in the football team, the clubs make contracts with coaches whose salaries directly depend on the performance of the teams.
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- TOEFL T P O 46 - Integrated Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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..., an athlete runner is always guided by the his/her teacher, when the runner get famous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2619.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 533.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91369606004 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63921731286 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472795497186 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 809.1 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.087973233 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6111111111 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216129512153 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727443647725 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361865728947 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126684420252 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490482150335 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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