Teacher's salaries should be based on their academic performances of their students.
Teaching is considered to be one of the most noble professions. It is indeed true that teachers are the future nation
builders. What the world has achieved from nuclear power to brief history of time- it would not be excess to say that
teachers deserve most of the credit. But yet not all teachers can produce prolific students, or in other words, not all
students are geniuses. The recommendation avers that teachers should be paid according to their students academic results. I mostly disagree with this recommendation for three specific reasons.
Not all students are bright. Not all of them can be straight-A students. It is natural that an academic class will have
both extraordinary student and dull student. It is indeed a teacher's duty to teach them right, but it is the duty of the
students to study the materials regularly, do the hard work. Let us assume that a classroom has both straight-A students and students
who are not that good with bringing good grades. Even the best teacher cannot do more than to help both types of students
by delivering good lectures or help them to understand. If a student does not do well in academics it is not necessarily a
teacher's fault. So, a teacher's payment cannot depend only on academic results.
Another reason is that, only academic results cannot determine a student's future. Suppose a student is a very good footballer
or he has an amazing talent of showing magics, if he wants to develop his career based on his excellence and interest sector he will
surely succeed in future. And it would be very normal for him to focus less on studies if he is determined about his career
in some other field. If that student does bad in exams, is it the teacher's fault? A teacher is the one who brings the best from
a student. If the teacher finds the student's best quality, then he surely is successful in his field.
In many cases, even good students cannot sit for exams during the finals, for being sick or for personal issues; or probably
seats for exam but cannot do well. Certainly, this is not the flaw of a teacher, and reducting salaries for such reasons is
absurd. Moreover, is salaries are reducted for such simple reasons, it wouldnt be a wonder that people will be less interested
to come to such a noble profession like teaching. The future generation would pay the cost if this happens.
It is normal to claim that teachers are there for students to excel in exams and that is what they are paid for. But in my view,
a teacher is paid not only for academic results, but for teaching students various virtues like honesty, truthfulness, punctuality, modesty etc.
Thus, discouraging teachers will less payment just for academic results of students is not a very good recommendation.
Our future is much more dependent on a good teacher. Teachers should help students to bring out the best in them, only that
should be the only focus for the measurement of a teacher, not only academics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, in many cases, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2509.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85299806576 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61467498156 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442940038685 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1485557081 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5172413793 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8275862069 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8275862069 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.97078651685 483% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212813937679 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674019612171 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649950375419 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701104629177 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496542584826 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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