Religion, a very sensitive topic to talk about and that too in a country like India. But still I take the risk to talk about the same. In recent times there has been a substantial rise in the news which have a core topic of religion. But I would like to talk about this from a different aspect.
Many spiritual organizations have come up in all the religions. Their main aim being to enlighten the human race and help them live an ideal life. These organizations have succeeded in transforming a lot many people who are depressed, or have lost their ambition in life, etc. They have also helped youngsters who at an early age have gone on a wrong path to return to intoxicated fresh life.
The common thing in all such organizations is that they give examples from the episodes of respective god and goddesses. They try to relate our way of life to what has been so called told by our Gods so that at the end of life we fulfill the basic requirement of our birth.
- Some people believe that our ever increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another Write a resp
- Teachers should get paid according to the performance of the student 16
- Religion a very sensitive topic to talk about and that too in a country like India But still I take the risk to talk about the same In recent times there has been a substantial rise in the news which have a core topic of religion But I would like to talk
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 2235.4752809 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 180.0 442.535393258 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37777777778 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 4.55969084622 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5436680038 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 704.065955056 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7704265001 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.8 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 12.1639044944 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 100.480337079 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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