Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The argument that technology makes our lives complicated is a flawed and shortsighted stance. In fact, technology greatly simplifies peoples' lives in a number of ways.
First, it greatly increases humans efficiency by reducing the amount of time required to accomplish daily tasks. Calculations that would have taken hours to complete for instance can now be completed in minutes. The simple act of making coffee, which could easily take up to 30 minutes can now be completed in seconds. This convenience provided by technology allows humans to free up an incredible amount of time on a daily basis.
Secondly, arguing that technology makes our lives more complicated overlooks the incomparable access that technology provides us today. Having an immesurable amount of information at our fingertips can't be taken for granted.
Finally, the fact that technology makes communication between people exponentially easier is another testament to the extent to which technology simplifies people's lives. Being able to communicate with people acccross the world at the touch of a button can significantly improve people's quality of life. A parent who can now easily communicate with their child at a college accross the country, or the employee who can collaorate with people around the world without having to travel are examples of the incredible impact that technology has on people's lives on a daily basis.
Although people might argue that technology makes it harder for people to form genuine connections and reduces the frequency of human interaction, making people's lives more complicated, I would argue that this can easily be undermined by the numerous examples of people forming incredible relationships through technology.
In conclusion, technology greatly simplifies our lives by reducing the amount of time humans take to complete their daily tasks, connecting people around the world and giving people access to a wealth of information in a matter of seconds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...amount of information at our fingertips cant be taken for granted. Finally, the fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95216830301 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49025974026 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4294999815 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134695645063 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600714326654 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395089674046 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863820627967 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256344089676 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.