Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
The change that technology brings to this world has been a polemic theme while human have been benefiting from multiple aspects of modern technology - media, architecture, and medical engineering. While some people praise the simplified life provided by advanced technology, others insist that our life is not simplified by the new techniques, moreover, it might help to even complicate our ordinary daily life. Both are validated thoughts towards the consequence of technology on our life, but concerning the goods that technology did for our society these days, from a personal or public aspect, I believe the simplifying effect of technology is much more prominent.
First, the technology breakthrough in medical bioengineering in the past century has made a simple and pain-free life possible and eventually coming true for many patients with severe disease and their families. For example, a patient with serious heart disease that does not have autonomic heart rhythm would be restrained in the hospital inpatient ward to rely on the pacemaker to sustain his or her life if the implanted heart pacemaker was not invented. With the implant, the patients nowadays can live a perfectly normal life like any healthy people, while don't even need to tell any other people that they have this very technological device inside their body. In this case, technology has relieved millions of people from having a burdensome life and simplified it to be as nice and easy as possible.
Furthermore, aside from people with special needs, the advanced technology in computational science also save people from different industries from repetitive works, for example, calculation and model building, by providing everyone computers, one of the most important intelligent machines on this planet. Not only individuals working in science fields but also those working in architecture or engineering industries, can save numerous time from the endless calculation task, and even without worries of getting a random error from a human remiss. Undoubtedly, technology has eased the whole process of basically every industry in the world and assist them to run as smoothly and successfully as possible.
Finally, while people may say the flood of information nowadays, as a consequence of the internet tech, can complicate our daily life with the flux. It is non-neglectable that fast-speed communication also enables us to make urgent contact and stay in touch with remote friends.
In a nutshell, the improvement that technology has made on simplifying the human life in this society has overweighted the slight inconvenience it might cause under special circumstances. Importantly, like argued in this passage, the facilitation that comes from modern technology in medicine, computer science, and many other aspects have undoubtedly simplified our life to a great extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mal life like any healthy people, while dont even need to tell any other people that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2426.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43946188341 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00188037369 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54932735426 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6631997693 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.285714286 118.986275619 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.21951772744 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147695218244 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546508880712 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626045521424 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880353459568 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069121994706 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.1392134831 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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