Theist way for society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, etc, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Is the best way for society to prepare its youth for leadership positions is but instilling cooperation and not competition? Cooperation is learning to work together efficiently towards a common goal while competition forces parties against one another to reach a goal. By looking at the real world examples below, the evidence is obvious that instilling cooperation and not compeition, is far superior in preparing today's youth for leadership roles.
To begin, government on all levels, from local to national, requires much cooperation between everyone involved. Take example, local government. At this level there can be intense campaigning with much cooperation needed. Each individual on the campaign trail has an important responsibility from going door-to-door, marketing, tele-campaigning, even up to writing the candidates speech. This is a great time for young individuals to get involved and understand the importance of working together as a team towards a ultimate, single goal. Thus, these experiences and networking will allow the individual to continue to develop into a future leader
Secondily, cooperation can be seen in today's health care system. Over 50% of today's youth are hoping to become a medical professional one day. Luckily, today's health care system allows for young individuals to actively participate and see the importance of cooperation with physician's and other allied health care providers. Student volunteer's, for example, are given the opportunity to observe the cooperation between physician's and nurses. By observing this interaction and seeing how fluid and efficient this can be, all towards working for a single goal, of making the patient's health better. The student can see the impact both physically and mentally, health care providers can have one an individual. This sense of cooperation may be instilled on the student and encourage them to reach for their goals.
Lastly, instilling a sense of cooperation can also be seen at the industrial level. A local printing company allows for students from a local community college to come in and observe many different professionals who work at the plant. These studentst see the individual importance of each person's job but it isn't until they see the entire picture that they appreciate the cooperation that is needed to efficiently run the company. Seeing the the entire process of a purchase being made from marketing, selling via customer service, blue prints, printing, folding, and shipping is crucial in understanding the importance of cooperation. Furthermore, seeing how this process is overseen by managers and how they handle mishappenings or unforseen circumstances is important. Understanding how in a large company, each individual person is important in the process, will be important for them to understand the importance of cooperation in ind
Overall, the best way for society to prepare it's young for leadership roles is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation. Though it is important to instill a sense of competition for competing for a spot in their educational program or employment, that is only a small piece to the larger puzzle. Giving students opportunities to strive and see the importance of cooperation will assist in their development of becoming future leaders in their field.
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- Argument Topic: "The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced 63
- Theist way for society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, etc, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'candidates'' or 'candidate's'?
Suggestion: candidates'; candidate's
...ele campaigning, even up to writing the candidates speech. This is a great time for young ...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e of working together as a team towards a ultimate, single goal. Thus, these expe...
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Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ommunity college to come in and observe many different professionals who work at the plant. Th...
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Line 7, column 452, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... to efficiently run the company. Seeing the the entire process of a purchase being made...
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Line 7, column 452, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... to efficiently run the company. Seeing the the entire process of a purchase being made...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'lastly', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'while', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252427184466 0.238963963785 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.15857605178 0.154291517835 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.088996763754 0.0886310499679 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0275080906149 0.0506014161523 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0226537216828 0.0449626384858 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114886731392 0.123526278965 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0550161812298 0.0379742944744 145% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.26082689946 2.82910677849 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0339805825243 0.0316879551592 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.100323624595 0.0950106342287 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0161812297735 0.0245489744465 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0113268608414 0.0157978311181 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3388.0 2899.98275862 117% => OK
No of words: 521.0 478.390804598 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.50287907869 6.0591788892 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.65681771538 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.420345489443 0.369966551584 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.343570057582 0.285172536893 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.259117082534 0.207245337619 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.201535508637 0.136322040163 148% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26082689946 2.82910677849 115% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 234.298850575 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491362763916 0.492565540709 100% => OK
Word variations: 58.146268828 56.8184620615 102% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 21.1264367816 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.652173913 23.7468607788 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9489882013 62.0618507366 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.304347826 143.81877709 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.652173913 23.7468607788 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.728815259664 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.71264367816 65% => OK
Readability: 57.0091796712 52.2641144681 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.02325581395 1.64547068916 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344675658516 0.39480681544 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11628764795 0.11556216369 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0758914009884 0.0736162880345 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.509419187834 0.531340600358 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146934797791 0.15197228837 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129768232679 0.158818324754 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112980800011 0.0851127212816 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.351499265727 0.388921930462 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0747843955269 0.0677916285025 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25946866445 0.28015025965 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128120747776 0.0610219844235 210% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.8591954023 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30459770115 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.96264367816 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.10632183908 185% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.93390804598 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.04597701149 98% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 15.0862068966 119% => OK
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Rates: 58.5 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.5 Out of 6