Today's world offers many ways to learn; reading books is no longer necessary to become a well-educated person.
In the ancient days, manuscripts and spoken word were the only ways to gain information or to communicate with people. As humans started advancing, manuscripts turned into books. Books were extensively used to gain information about any particular subject. Shelves and shelves of books were preserved and copied so that masses could benefit from them. Time passed by and technology began to advance. Now, in the 21st century, we have internet, television, CDs and books to gain information and knowledge. So, this shows that yes, books are no longer necessary to gain information or to become a well-educated person.
Everything that a person needs to know about a particular subject is available on the internet. If a person wants to know how to travel in a particular country, the internet is enough to acquire some information about it. There is absolutely no need to read travel guides or guidebooks about a certain location. If someone wants to know the facts about a historical event or about a scientific discovery 100 years ago, the internet provides enough information for that person to become an expert is the chosen topic. Various informative shows on television are helpful in providing knowledge. Channels such as Discovery TV, National Geography, Animal Planet, History TV18, etc. give a variety of knowledge while simultaneously making it fun and entertaining. Mirade of channels on television and websites on the internet help in educating people while making it interesting. Students all over the world, from kindergarten to masters level, take the help of television or internet to gain knowledge or process information. Schools use digital softwares with artistic visuals to make learning fun for students, which a step ahead than using illustrated books.
This might make us believe that books are not as important, but they are still an integral part of information gaining process. Reading is considered as an exercise for the mind. A very popular opinion is that reading from a printed book is always better than reading from a screen. The experience of reading a handheld, an ink-printed book is very different than compared to a screen and in a good way. There are many life lessons to be learned from the classics that have been brought into this world. Enid Blyton, J.K. Rowling, Austen Jane, Sudha Murthy, Ruskin Bond, and many more amazing authors have given us so much to read and think about. Scientific books which have information about various topics ranging from biology to engineering are published to help students in gaining knowledge. For someone who is an avid reader, the love for books will never fade. For someone who does not like reading, there are many more options to become educated, including books.
So, while books have been and are being extensively used by the worlds' population, it is no longer necessary to acquire education. Various above-mentioned sources are also widely used to learn and know about various subjects. While nothing can replace the love people have for reading novels, comics and stories; educational books are not necessary to be carried around as you could carry it around in your phone nowadays. Specific pages or paragraphs necessary could also be marked and kept. Acquiring education is subjective and depends on person to person on how they choose to acquire it. We need to take advantage of the various knowledge offered to us, irrespective of the source.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-10-01 | Riya Jadhav | 50 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1092, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fun'
Suggestion: to fun
... with artistic visuals to make learning fun for students, which a step ahead than u...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
..., an ink-printed book is very different than compared to a screen and in a good way....
^^^^
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...n and are being extensively used by the worlds population, it is no longer necessary t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2887.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 564.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11879432624 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87326216964 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77603354271 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 916.2 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.629700896 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.21875 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4375 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266989461928 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621808764031 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690656291958 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160483040344 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466979503561 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 100.480337079 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.