Topic: People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
In a democratic country the government is to the people, by the people and for the people. Although, rules and authorities makes us more punctual and social in our daily lifestyle and prevent obfuscations regarding various issues that we face on our daily basis. Ruling government has the right to make decisions and authorize numerous aspects and not the other for well beings of a community and nation as well.
Since the beginning the whole world has been struggling right from the ancient time to be ruled by numerous great rulers and legends who try to win the world by their perseverance and blood for the same. But each and every rule made is for the convenience and making the normal life of the people good and effective. But, when a rule starts dominating the people than it starts disturbing the normal regulation process.
For example, a government working for their health and eductaion is good, but when try to impose the rules in a way that seems to be dictatorship is the start point of disturbing any nation's growth and prosperity as well.
Moreover, it would be unfair to not utter the name of ideal dictatorship called the Hitler. We all are familiar with his dictatorship that leads the world to pay the most in this history of any war. Thousands of jews were killed brutally just for the shake that they belong to different religion. Thus, dominating hands have always been more prone to be cut down by the swords of democracy.
Whenever, any imposition of rules or authority try to disturb people then if definitely needs to be shut down to prevent any harm to any being.
If any authority difficult and create fuss with people's life it has to be opposed to restore the normality and coherence in the society.
However, rules are always made to bring harmony and peace in every corner of the world to make an organized environment for all to live with happiness and prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...ing the whole world has been struggling right from the ancient time to be ruled by nu...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ip is the start point of disturbing any nations growth and prosperity as well. More...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75975975976 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58867916482 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537537537538 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5407348642 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.214285714 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144629300949 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542753062718 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458226611117 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784160276057 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506117472247 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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