Topic..... Technology causes more problems for modern societies than it solves.
This topic raises the controversy about technology being more of a problem than its bringing solution to our modern societies. Indisputably, technology has comes with it's share of challenges. Nevertheles, technology has made the world a much more easier and comfortable to place to live in. Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that technology causes more problem and would argue that it has rather solved more problems.
First of all, technology has brought globalisation into the world. The introduction of electronic gadgets like our phones,computer system and a more improved internet network has made the nation at large improve in a lot of aspects. People in remote areas can network easily with people from bigger and more developed societies. They herby have access to more information to help better thier own country. Globalisation is obviously one way through which technology has solved problem of poor communication and networking in the modern societies.
Furthermore, technology has introduced mechanization. This has helped the modern societies to reduce the intensity of labourious work. A very good example of this is the invention of automobiles. Transportation in the olden days was mainly through the use of foot or animal powered sources such as horses,donkeys. This form of transportation is very enervates one and is not at all luxurious. It also can cause delay in transporting materials like agricultural products to the consumers who is in dire need of it. This can even leaf to spoilage of the products due to poor storage facility. Hence, the evidence above demonstrates that technology has solved more problem for the modern society.
Admittedly, technology also has its share of problems. This is true especially when it comes to the area of climate change. Exhaust from cars, industries has brought about accumulation of green house gases which in turn cause depletion of ozone layer and climate change. However, such problems could be avoided if the use of less exhaustive vehicles are put in place, industries also should use machines that don't emit much exhaust polluting the environment.
In conclusion, although technology comes with its share of problem,it does not cause more problem than it has solved. The so called challenges that comes with technology can be improved upon with more technological inventions. Technology has however being of tremendous important to the modern society in terms of improved living condition and globalisation.
- Topic Technology causes more problems for modern societies than it solves 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...s, technology has made the world a much more easier and comfortable to place to live in. Th...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , computer
...on of electronic gadgets like our phones,computer system and a more improved internet net...
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Line 5, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , donkeys
...or animal powered sources such as horses,donkeys. This form of transportation is very en...
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Line 7, column 410, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ndustries also should use machines that dont emit much exhaust polluting the environ...
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Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...chnology comes with its share of problem,it does not cause more problem than it ha...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ology comes with its share of problem,it does not cause more problem than it has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.368956743 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08020706177 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8348836874 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.9166666667 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419637265109 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107241756441 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112986321151 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23102286146 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117824057105 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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