The true test of the greatness of a work of art is its ability to be understood by the masses.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Art as an aesthetic related field is hard to measure its success and greatness, it has various measures such as power of its beauty, its message, integrity, popularity. To some extent, it can measured by popularity, however, in my opinion, there are far more important standards such as its subject and message, its visual design and combining all of these.
First important measure is its power of vision and succesful complexity. If we take understood by the masses is main property, then we should accept all simple art pieces as great and bombastic. However, a great art piece should be iconoclastic and innovative compared to previous works. For instance, a popular song, Summertime Sadness by Lana Del Ray has too many audiences but in fact, it is too simple and effortless work. This definition oversimplifies meaning of art actually daunts too many amateur artists.
Secondly, the most important thing is its message and how they implement this message into these pieces. For instance, Banksy, a successful street artist hint his message so professionally, and even not much people understand and appreciate it, nobody can gainsay its greatness.
Thirdly, integrity of art is important, that is, freedom of speech of an artist is for more necessary than understandable. Question of understanding by masses bring political concerns, and if one artist starts to consider political bound then he or she loses its freedom of speech and become an artist belongs to this party and its supporter. For instance, in Ottoman Empire, many leaders hired artist to praise and portray them as a gorgeous leader, and they have been apprecited by its immense supporters. However, this does not show the greatness of an artwork.
On the other hand, some works of art reveal increadible talent and no one can find any fault and become a classic. For instance, Van Gogh's The Scream is understanble and appreicated by the masses, in constrast, this root from its qualities not from simplicity or straightforward.
In conclusion, all things considered, measuring of art does not depend on only understanding by the masses, it comprises far more various standards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'measure'
Suggestion: measure
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Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: Summer
...us works. For instance, a popular song, Summertime Sadness by Lana Del Ray has too many au...
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Suggestion:
...message into these pieces. For instance, Banksy, a successful street artist hint ...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...message so professionally, and even not much people understand and appreciate it, no...
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...dly, integrity of art is important, that is, freedom of speech of an artist is f...
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... hired artist to praise and portray them as a gorgeous leader, and they have been...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18233618234 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95909510859 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578347578348 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6131789142 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6875 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 5.21951772744 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120109405571 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042063133939 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239328326238 0.0758088955206 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060944567731 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224237569351 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.