To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
centuries or decades ago, someone would hear and see inequalities between men and women and this was all depending on the inherent physical differences between both genders. Of course this was something some males took advantage of, having positions in the society that there may be some females more qualified for. The obvious differences between the two genders ingendered this belief, however, recent researches and social experiments have proven that the physical differences between men and women cannot affect their suitness for almost all the tasks that a male was preferred to do.
In the 19th century, more equality between men and women was sought by feminist moves, this equality has been taking place gradually till the half of the 20th century when the society morphed into a place where there is no differentiation between people in terms of gender or color or race. As we see the industrial and technological revolution in the last two centuries was the first of its kind in the history of humanity, a reasonable person mey conclude the humanbeing has been in need for this equality to happen to exploit the power of every one to burgeon.
Further more we can see that recently many successful political leaders have been leading their countries to the success. we can take the german politician Merkel as an example for the successful politicians. Not only in the political field women have been succeeding, also in sports, we have seen in the olympics that in many sports women have more winning ratio than men, we can also see that there is many female bodybuilders in the world and many sportswomen recover from pregnancy and cultivate in their sport.
Finally, someone may judge that women are not as strong as men in physical manner, however, we can conclude the opposite seeing the progress women made in the last two centuries in many fields and that the society need them to be empowered to benefit the society.
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...regnancy and cultivate in their sport. Finally, someone may judge that women ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, so, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92966360856 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60112192599 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525993883792 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4655306881 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.111111111 118.986275619 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 23.4991977007 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0200542439531 0.243740707755 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00969229217928 0.0831039109588 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196009751677 0.0758088955206 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0157895086078 0.150359130593 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160110671494 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 14.1392134831 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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