The author of the statement want to convey a message that cities are center of society. That is why one can learn prime attributes of society.
In this era of globalisation and digitisation major cities got all types of population. As you will observe in Bangalore (city of India) there are people living there from all over global. Even for native of Bangalore there is vast change in there culture and lifestyle. So in today's world judging characteristics of society from its modern city can lead to wrong assumption.
Many societies have agriculture background. So there rituals and customs can only learn from there respective rural areas. Or we can say villages are backbone of societies.
Even modern cities depends on agriculture to sustain. So to study society one must study rural areas too.
The author of the statement want to convey a message that cities are center of society. That is why one can learn prime attributes of society.
In this era of globalisation and digitisation major cities got all types of population. As you will observe in Bangalore (city of India) there are people living there from all over global. Even for native of Bangalore there is vast change in there culture and lifestyle. So in today's world judging characteristics of society from its modern city can lead to wrong assumption.
Many societies have agriculture background. So there rituals and customs can only learn from there respective rural areas. Or we can say villages are backbone of societies.
Even modern cities depends on agriculture to sustain. So to study society one must study rural areas too.
The author of the statement want to convey a message that cities are center of society. That is why one can learn prime attributes of society.
In this era of globalisation and digitisation major cities got all types of population. As you will observe in Bangalore (city of India) there are people living there from all over global. Even for native of Bangalore there is vast change in there culture and lifestyle. So in today's world judging characteristics of society from its modern city can lead to wrong assumption.
Many societies have agriculture background. So there rituals and customs can only learn from there respective rural areas. Or we can say villages are backbone of societies.
Even modern cities depends on agriculture to sustain. So to study society one must study rural areas too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to prime'
Suggestion: to prime
...r of society. That is why one can learn prime attributes of society. In this era o...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...jor cities got all types of population. As you will observe in Bangalore city of I...
^^
Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to prime'
Suggestion: to prime
...r of society. That is why one can learn prime attributes of society. In this era o...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...jor cities got all types of population. As you will observe in Bangalore city of I...
^^
Line 17, column 115, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to prime'
Suggestion: to prime
...r of society. That is why one can learn prime attributes of society. In this era o...
^^^^^
Line 19, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...jor cities got all types of population. As you will observe in Bangalore city of I...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04975124378 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75562164623 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 215.323595506 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.216417910448 0.4932671777 44% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7989192345 60.3974514979 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5151515152 118.986275619 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1818181818 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 5.21951772744 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.97078651685 241% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 24.0 4.83258426966 497% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14705489163 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507609665708 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713292644076 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919396129638 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655258759993 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 48.8420337079 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 12.1743820225 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.76 8.38706741573 69% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 100.480337079 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.7820224719 51% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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