to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
The statement wrongfully linking valuable aspects of a society to the study of its major cities is a new age way of thinking. Although it is understandable to acknowledge that major cities include a lot of insight to the economy, social, and political viewpoints, we must halt and ask ourselves how these cities came to flourish. Rural cities may speak for a smaller population, but a population nevertheless that provides a backbone of tradition and culture that arose before these cities were able to flourish.
Major cities are very diverse and rich in culture but can lack the understanding of entire state or country. For instance, Frederick, Maryland is not a major city but has several landmarks and battlefield viewings from the Civil War. Even while strolling along the streets, there are stones by stop lights that state what exactly happened in that area and who won what battle. In Oklahoma, some people believe that the locals ride horses to and from their destinations. This generalization can’t come from the areas popular cities because only the more rural areas use horses or have enough land to house the equine. In order to experience the full farming and agricultural experience, you would have to go to the more rural areas, like Jones and even the panhandle.
Not only do major cities lack the cultural aspect of a state or country, they also can misrepresent the political viewpoints. In Oklahoma, you would vastly understand that the farmers are not always being heard judicially because they are not only far, maybe 2 or more hours out, from the city, but they are also few in numbers. Even in France, where most vineyard owners and cheese farmers make up most of the economic value, we may not understand their frustrations unless going to them and experiences their hardships.
In contrast to the statement, we can also diverge that major cities and rural cities can lack the understanding of an entire community altogether. In Iran, the entire country is being watched by the government. What I mean by this is that the government is in high surveillance and monitors and filters everything on the Web. In the major and rural cities of Iran there could be a disliking to the government, the Islāmic religion, and more, but we would not be able to identify these enlightened people due to them being watched. I will say that in rural areas it is possible to get away with these ideas of free thinking because they are not likely connected to the internet and so distant that the government may not reach them as well as the population in the city.
Major cities will always give the highlight real, so to speak, of the country or state. The real economic, social, and political standpoints won’t be represented as fairly unless adding the experiences background of the rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, i mean, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to, so to speak
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2354.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90416666667 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72926526539 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2438759419 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.894736842 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2631578947 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932476028218 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304357131847 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283817232073 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533606654546 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246034745187 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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