The statement establishes that major cities offer defining characteristics and insights into their countries playing on how in media they seem to supplant the nation itself. In travel brochures for different nations, these municipalities take center stage often filling the advert. Often times such metropolises have large concentrations of individuals in all stages of social status offering a rich diversity in opulence. Outsiders and insiders alike regard such cities as the paragon for their respective nations.
By attributing the main idiosyncrasies of society to the few grandiose towns, the statement marginalizes the broad majority of towns that make up the rest of the nation. For example, in the United States, the largest cities only have about a million inhabitants. This seems like a vast number, but in actuality, it is quite minuscule compared to the 300 million people who live in the nation. Irrespective of this shortcoming, highly populated locations offer rich, diverse experiences that illuminate the major characteristics of a given culture.
First, major cities have more people compared to other smaller towns. This does not only include inhabitants but due to events and resources, big cities tend to draw people from neighboring cities for recreation as well. For example, large companies such as Facebook tend to send employees to large cities such as San Francisco business and fun. With large congregations of people come large congregations of ideas and cultural events. For example, conventions tend to take place in large cities such as Los Angeles or San Diego, home to the world-renowned Comic-Con which exemplifies how new events regarding the arts are revealed and distributed. These large events culminate in a society’s characteristics and cannot be ignored. Therefore, due to the presence of people and events, major cities offer great insight into the region's societal attributes.
Also, large towns often have great historic value as many started off as the first towns in their respective nations and contain many government buildings as well. For example, the history and attitude of US politics are always at full display in the nation’s capital. Important national decisions and announcements take place there along with a well-documented reel of past nation highlights in the form of parks and monuments. Ignoring a capital in the study of a nation would be omitting the political attitude and attributes of the given society. Hence, the historical significance of a metropolis allows one to understand the most important parts of a society as well.
Thus, to understand the major elements of a society one cannot ignore its massive cities. Such locations offer many cultural events that give insight into attitudes regarding the arts. Furthermore, they contain rich pasts which give insights into how thought has progressed over time and what was important enough to be remembered.
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- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2494.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42173913043 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01757924487 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539130434783 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5248602247 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.434782609 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34782608696 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146139841345 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444359625993 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726237323635 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817529827884 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491230394247 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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