To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Recognizing a society by studying the major cities is true because of three reasons. First, some societies are changing very fast and usually changes start from major cities. As an instance, society in my country is changing rapidly. Life styles have changed in a way that current generation can not understand the previous generation. In this condition, when you take a trip to a small city in my country you are also moving in the time and going to the past. For example, in the small cities people are more religious, families are bigger, wemon are not aware of their rights and even some man have two wifes. In this condition, if some one go to small cities to know my society he would ge information about the past.
Second, people in big cities usually are more aware of political and cultural issues. Major cities usually change the political and cultural direction of a society. As an instance, 40 years ago a revolution happened in Iran. The revolution started from Tehran which was the capital city. There are couple of NGOs that are working toward human rights that all are located in major cities.
Third, most of history of a nation have happned in major cities. As an instance, there are three cities in Iran which have been the capital cities during the last 1000 years. Most of the cultural centers, building which are symbols of the history are located in these cities. Therefore, taking a trip to these three major cities would give a short history of our country.
On the contrary, some people argue that major cities are not all of a society and small cities sometimes have their own culture. Consequently, some people believe that you would not get a exhastive undestanding of a society if you just study major cities. Although, major cities would not present all information about a society but I think major cities give you the most updated knowledge about a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore, third, even so, for example, i think, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77507598784 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42424415999 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468085106383 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4922300784 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6842105263 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.83258426966 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176499948813 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061596781467 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562991908942 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115255876741 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356949978513 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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