To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities

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To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

What are the most important characteristics of a society? Certainly, culture, history, customs, cuisine, social behaviour, ideals, politics, economics, etc. are the most essential tenets that unify any society. The author contends that the most important characteristics of any society can be understood by studying its major cities. While some of the important aspects of a society are better understood in cities, it is imperative to study communities in rural areas and towns to understand a society in its entirety.

Verily, major cities act as intellectual, academic, political art and often architectural hearts of a country. Being centres for colleges, universities and institutions of learning, major cities act as intellectual and academic hub of a society. Similarly, with the government offices, parliament and premiere’s residence in place, studying capital cities may provide insight into the political functioning of a country. Moreover, metropolitans also serve as a platform to project a society’s aesthetic and literary accomplishments through theatres, museums, library, etc. because their operation and maintenance require capital as well as big market which may be lacking in rural or smaller cities. For instance, libraries provide avenues to showcase scholarly work, painters showcase their talent in art galleries and so on. Then there are some big cities that highlight the architectural or historical legacy of a society. For instance, while every nook and corner of the city of Rome speaks about the bygone Roman architecture, the tower of London and London Bridge reveal much about the British history.

However, there are myriad other characteristics such as economics, social behaviour, ideals and customs which are more visible in rural areas and towns. This is especially true when the demographic distribution of a country is concentrated in the rural areas. For example, India is an agrarian economy with a big chunk of population having traditional occupation of farm related activities. Needless to say, such a trend cannot be understood in an Indian metropolis and the same holds true for other professions such as lock making, handicrafts, handloom weaving, hand-made leather footwear which flourish in some smaller traditional towns.

Moreover, due to lack of connectivity and immigration, the endogamous rural population don’t integrate or assimilate with other groups thus helping them to retain their social behaviour, customs and ideals in pristine form. For instance, the Arabian Bedouins are known for their distinct nomadic lifestyle, woollen clothes, herding and livestock, poetry honesty, forthrightness, etc. Certainly, while studying Dubai might provide understanding about the petrodollar driven modernization and globalization of the Emirati society, one cannot get the glimpse of the original Arabian Bedouin culture without venturing out in outskirt deserts.

Finally, modernization, globalization and fast-paced life of cities have served to adulterate their native culture. Most of the major cities round the world are now more a part of a global society and have lost their original roots. This is further corroborated by the fact that people busy to earn their livelihood have little time to pay attention to their cultural traditions. They prefer McDonald's over their traditional cuisine, multiplexes over classical theater shows, night clubs over campfire songs, solemn court marriages over classical wedding ceremonies, corporate or casual attire over cultural costumes and what not. Similarly, influx of international immigrants due to better job and living standards assures that the original culture is diluted. It is for this reason that popping up of numerous oriental and Asian restaurants in London over the few decades has served to take off the focus from traditional English breakfast from the visitors and the locals.

In conclusion, the statement is agreeable to the extent that many important societal characteristics such as intellectual and academic achievements, politics, art and architecture, etc. can be understood by studying its major societies. However, understanding of other equally essential elements of a society such as culture, economics, social behaviour, etc. are better facilitated by rural areas for their significant share in the population and ability to retain the purity of those aspects due to lack of assimilation into other groups. The adulteration and dilution of native culture brought about by modernization and globalization of major cities also corroborate this fact.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, thus, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3907.0 2235.4752809 175% => OK
No of words: 686.0 442.535393258 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69533527697 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.11777311996 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12391214735 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 347.0 215.323595506 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50583090379 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 1239.3 704.065955056 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3563014193 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.032258065 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1290322581 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06451612903 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265873914269 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754974227331 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105786029934 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145667844505 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136563932197 0.0667264976115 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.1639044944 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 201.0 100.480337079 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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