The issue of understanding the most important characteristics of the society refers to analyzing its whole system. The first question to address is the one concerning the main characteristics. Thriving into this issue will probably give the following answers: staple parts of society are culture, politics, economics, educational system and so forth. The following passages will help to understand how these factors could be easily analyzed in major cities.
Main cities are a concentration of the prevailing part of the society, therefore the results, gained from the investigation of these places, will be statistically more significant than the results from smaller ones. Major cities provide information about the characteristic, mentioned in the first passage.
Firstly, the governing system is considered to be in the capital city, hence the information, gained from the mother city of the society, will help to assess the overall political system.
Secondly, in every society major cities are formed around the economically convenient places. Thus, the analysis of the major cities will provide with precious information about the economic development of the society.
Finally, the educational system and the culture are the main driving forces of the society. They are the seeds of power and development of the country. The main aspects of them can be found in main cities of the society prior to the fact that they concentrate a huge amount of population.
Nevertheless, it can’t be rejected that minor cities don’t contain important information about the main characteristic, but the major ones are more convenient to analyze and give proper information. Furthermore, the minor cities can provide information of local interest, and generally this information can’t be dispensed to the overall society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 279.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57347670251 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1197664646 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505376344086 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0271306844 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.071428571 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180408474446 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679868957004 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074284651775 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085784269469 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658437289175 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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