Every nation has a past of good and bad decisions made by their leaders.So understanding the past will be of use to those in current positions of leadership to consider what made their antecedents go with their decisions and how it surged or plunged the growth of their country. A leader should always take into account all the things done by his past leaders to decide what he needs to do with people of his nation keeping in their best interests.Like it gives an opportunity to understand what his people likes and what they want from there leader to do for them.It will also help the current leader to not commit any mistake done by his predecessor.every country has different needs like in third world countries the major problem is poverty and hunger and with developed country the problem is increasing cost of living so one nation cannot be compared to others and solutions of will not be of any use to other.So,the only medium of reference for the leader of the nation is to refer the past and plan for the future.They need to ask themselves whether today did we make the day better for our people than yesterday. Understanding the past schemes adopted by their leaders were any success or not also help the current leaders to analyse where it went wrong and how can they make it a success. Like if a housing scheme was introduced for the people below poverty line and their previous government intend to build 1000 houses with a fixed budget but only 500 of them were made with the allotted budget so what made this deficit, is it due to corruption can be questioned and the current leader can mitigate those issues . But simply understanding the past doesn't solve all the problems there are some issues that require modern solutions like in the case of employment shift , back in the 19th century people were focused only on the manufacturing sector and thought that's the great source of employment but in 20th century with the boom in software field it has created a lot of employment opportunities in this field .So the government should make the people shift from manufacturing to information technology field by training them.So it's completely new for the present leaders as they are trying to attempt something new which was never done by their previous leaders. So,understanding the past will be definitely of some use to those in current positions of leadership.
- Those who see their ideas through regardless of doubts or criticism others may express are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy 50
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- Those who see their ideas through regardless of doubts or criticism others may express are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy 50
- Those who see their ideas through regardless of doubts or criticism others may express are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy 50
- Understanding the past is of little use to those in current positions of leadership Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75786924939 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71667912686 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489104116223 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 23.0359550562 295% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 263.799587229 60.3974514979 437% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 327.5 118.986275619 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.8333333333 23.4991977007 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148880639893 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102317361023 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676013806586 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148880639893 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 14.1392134831 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.92 48.8420337079 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 12.1743820225 235% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 11.2143820225 260% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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