Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the modern society, an appealing image has already become increasing important than ever before. Someone even claims that creating an amazing image has overshadowed catching up with the reality or truth behind. From my perspective of view, it is undeniably true that an appealing outlook could bring about significant benefits in various fields. However, this doesn't mean that the pursuance of reality could be supplanted by such glorying appearance. It is also worth to point out that we should further incubate our insightful understanding in order to grasp with the essence of facts.
To start off, a brilliant appearance is of no doubt an important factor for success in many fields. In the field of business, possession of enchanting aspects in key circumstances, either advertisement or propagation, plays a significant role in business performance, since such outlook could attract the public's attention and therefore further build up potential opportunities and revenues. The same principle could be applied for popular music as well. This is also the reason why the popular stars or bands always strive to build up engrossing images, because proliferation of music fans is capable of facilitate their sales of albums and other chances. Furthermore, such engrossing appearance could also diminish the negative impact from media scrutiny, which is able to redraw people's attention to positive side of appearance.
However, while we emphasize the significance of appearance, I have to concede that superficial outlook couldn't withstand challenges of time, since the reality is supposed to ultimately emerge. As time goes by, the real status behind the enchanting image could be exposed to the public, especially under further investigation. Consequently, even people previously addicited with aspect might disenchant and clearly distinguish the real with the falsehood. Such discrepancy could possibly lead to collapse of insincere appearance and result in perception of the truth behind the sense. For instance, despite car advertisement that swagger its robust performance and excellent stability, people's initial enthusiasm is bound to languish, if they found so-said information hardly match with the real statistics based on odometer. This could also be exemplified by music album with flamboyant wrapper. If the real music connoisseur discovered its hackneyed essence, can they still stick to previous ardor? Perhaps not.
Last but not least, If we want to avoid false evaluation with importance regarding appearance, it is necessary to encourage with accumulation of knowledge and deep insight concerning diverse facts, which undoubtedly safeguards us from incorrectly prioritizing the aforementioned factors. Since first impression could easily catch up with our attention, we might easily indulge with such bewitching outlook and further results in superficially positive understanding. As a result, we are inclined to make higher remark than the real worth for things. It is only through accumulation of daily observation and knowledge building-up that people could possess insights to touch on the most substantive facts. By leveraging such ability, the illusion of outlook could be dispelled and the truth could emerge in front of us. As mentioned above, no matter how advertisement look like, technical performance analysis based on odometer could reveal to us the comprehensive view about the car's overall status. Such objective evaluation could guarantee us to eschew with meretricious appearance design and make more disinterested appraisal.
In summary, having an attractive appearance could definitely enhance opportunities of success, because such charisms play a decisive role for success in certain fields. However, as old saying tells "the truth flow above falsehood", the bogus outlook deems to be replaced by the reality or truth behind the sense. Furthermore, only by accreting holistic knowledge for diverse facts in our life, we can become confident about our ability to identify the truth behind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in summary, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 101.0 58.6224719101 172% => OK
Nominalization: 35.0 12.9106741573 271% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3444.0 2235.4752809 154% => OK
No of words: 612.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62745098039 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07124523783 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 338.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552287581699 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 1070.1 704.065955056 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 13.0 3.10617977528 419% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2491565956 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.555555556 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.03703703704 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144309509195 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428381652264 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536495093411 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941464599526 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615429140143 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 193.0 100.480337079 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.