universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Education and knowledge never has a limit and whatsoever gained whenever and where ever should be acquired as it's always beneficial for an individual.From my point of view,i do agree with the given statement that universities should require every student to take a wide range of courses which are outside the student's field of study.That definitely will help the child to have knowledge not only in one particular field but a wide range of fields.
Such system of university would also be helpful for the child who is confused which field to select,what to study and what not to study.Apart from this ,the child who has interest in one or more fields can also pursue his studies and knowledge in more than one field.So basically from this system, i foresee that the hesitation of the child in selecting the field would somewhat be eliminated.
In today's world where diversity is a must;it would also be helpful for the child to get a good and respectable job if he a diverse knowledge of various fields, once he completes his or her studies.For example a civil engineer having a knowledge of subjects related to computer engineering would be helpful to him or her as nowadays use of computer related softwares in making plans of the buildings are much into existence.Also it would be beneficial for the person who employs such a civil engineer having knowledge in both fields as he won't have to employ another person for that purpose and as there would be considerable saving in cost for that person.
However,studying subjects and acquiring knowledge in the subjects other than the student's field of study would quiet be burdensome for the child as they will have to study a lot.Even parents would have some burden regarding the fees as it would be considerably high than that of child studying one particular field.Also university should take care while applying such method of study,the student should not be left dilettante and should have considerable knowledge in one particular field.
Conclusively,from my viewpoint i would say that universities must require every student to take variety of courses they like and wish to pursue apart from their particular field of study and for the overall betterment of the child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, while, apart from, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97860962567 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85832378682 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475935828877 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 23.0359550562 321% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.800435413 60.3974514979 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 372.4 118.986275619 313% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.8 23.4991977007 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 5.21951772744 307% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249585167376 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184815423595 0.0831039109588 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122478207488 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184815423595 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122478207488 0.0667264976115 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 14.1392134831 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.63 48.8420337079 -7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 12.1743820225 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 11.2143820225 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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