the greatness of an individual can be decided only by those whose live after them, not by their contemporaries.
Greatness of a person is a characteristic which can not be determined by a few people who live or stay around him or her.In my view, i somewhat disagree with the given statement.For a person to be called great,it requires many characteristics to be fulfilled which can not be determined by the person living after him or her.The greatness depend on the overall characteristics and behaviour of the person which requires an external influence.
It also needs to compared by their contemporaries,that actually will show how effective and great an individual is.The people living besides an individual would be the people who are the relatives or the well wisher of an individual,so anyways they are going to say good things about that individual and this thing is not going to decide the greatness of an individual.The greatness of an individual can be determined once they come in real world ,far from there well wishers, and dealing with the people around them. That actually shows how capable and great a person or an individual is.
Secondly in a two faced or a double dealing world,greatness of people cannot only be determined by few persons alone.one cannot say that how an individual is because he might be good to some of the persons and among some persons he might be an evil.An example of that is :a child would always consider his or her parents great and would like to follow them but the child does not know how his or her parents are performing in the real world.
Thirdly comparison should be made between the contemporaries which will show how well the person is and if he lacking behind that person,attempt to improve can also be made by an individual.So greatness of person can also be measured from that view point.It is actually a good measure as it motivates an individual.
Thus,greatness of a person according to my view point is an overall assessment of the person which not only can be determined by the person living by their side but also the external influence of the person by comparing with their contemporaries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, besides, but, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84943181818 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05091416154 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434659090909 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 23.0359550562 252% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.301335858 60.3974514979 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 284.5 118.986275619 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.6666666667 23.4991977007 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 5.21951772744 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372764814706 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212833701927 0.0831039109588 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655858387055 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22495163818 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679044243685 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 14.1392134831 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.07 48.8420337079 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 12.1743820225 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 11.2143820225 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 11.7820224719 212% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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