As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
From ancient times mankind is trying to unravel the mystery of this universe. In their quest of searching, they are learning so much yet the deeper they dive into the ocean of knowledge the more they are getting lost in the mystery they called “The Universe”. I completely agree with the statement, acquiring knowledge isn’t making things easier rather making the earlier findings more complicated and mysterious.
The human mind is always curious, always intrigued by the question “why”. And this simple “why” had led man to discover so many mysteries, answering so many of their questions. Yet these answers are getting more tangled up with many more questions when many more enigmas are popping up on their quest of searching. For example, when man was trying to find out the reason behind a disease they started learning about human morphology, then anatomy and physiology. The more deeper they are learning the more lost they are getting into the maze of nerves, vessels and capillaries.
Yes, we cannot deny the fact that acquiring knowledge has enlightened us, shower us with answers that we had been searching for ages, yet this knowledge has made us more curious and urged us to go in search of more mysteries.
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- TPO-1-integrated writing 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 467, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'deeper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: deeper
...ology, then anatomy and physiology. The more deeper they are learning the more lost they ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00970873786 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55419161503 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567961165049 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 704.065955056 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1289122266 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310732640547 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119279988273 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103164806296 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216583372274 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233371850897 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.