As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible , but more complex and mysterious
Knowledge is the gift that has been bestowed upon humans and with the help of it human race have acheived great milestone ranging from the invention of wheel from rolling log to the space stations that landed on moon and mars. Knowledge , curiosity and reasoning all goes hand in hand and thus as the more knowledge we accumulate the more we understand the enigmatic and convulated nature of different things. I agree with the statement mentioned above the more knowledge makes things more complex and the below mentioned points will try to bolster my opinion.
Firstly, the more knowledge you gain the more you quetion and ruminate about reality of something and that ultimately leads to obfuscate or rather make that subject tortuous. For example , a small child having no idea about the velocity of light and light year will admire the stars with fascination and beleive that they are just near to us. While on the other hand a person with good knowledge in space and physics will also look at the stars with fascination but with the facts that he/she is actually looking into the past as light takes many years to reach our eyes from the star due to the distance. Same object i.e stars here varies for different person , for an guillable child with less knowledge it is simple and straight topic but for the erudite person the same thing is very complex.
Secondly, subjects that seems insignificant or easy at first with superficial knowledge might become more complex than it seems with getting comprehended with that subject. Its like you can only measure the depth of the sea by jumping and going deep beneath it. For an instance , the topics like the birth and death, karma and the reason behind the suffering of life might initially look simple but as we ruminate deeply about it and gain more insights about these esoteric topics only then we can understand the vast complicated features it posses.
However this might not be the case always, gaining knowledge also helps to understand some subjects to the root which helps to benefit the world. Let us take the example of the medicine field, the more we got to know about the different types of pathogens and pernicous disease like cancer the more are we able to tackle these problems by proper vaccines and therapy. In this case knowledge plays a vital role to make a subject more comprehensible rather than making it complex.
Despite the above exception we can't undermine the complex and enigmatic result that have been the result of the profound knowledge. Knowledge is like that sea that if once you take a dive in it it will always fascinate us with the mysteries as we go deep into it. Thus in my conclusion I want to convey that great knowledge can make a subject more complex rather than making it more simple and understandable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2324.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 487.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77207392197 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43907006114 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494866529774 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5880870226 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.933333333 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4666666667 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 5.21951772744 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36222766493 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12650822933 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115657495316 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230269851242 0.150359130593 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074188959641 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.