Knowledge is often considered to be an ocean and there is high possibility that a person is being exposed to various subjects from diverse domains. This diversity might raise multiple contradictions whether this increase in learning makes things more understandable or rather complex. The prompt similarly recommends the conflicts that might be caused through exponential growth in information and might lead to complexity rather than quality. However, I nearly disagree with this opinion due to three reasons.
To begin, Knowledge can be as simple as knowing how a specific application operates. These days complexity in life is surging at a tremendous rate, and with new technologies in place, at least half of the people are always lacking any idea of even the simplest of innovations or using new instruments on a daily life. For instance, old people are always confused and scared of using new appliances in the house. They might have certain apprehensions regarding the new smart phones in the market and often feel they might not adjust to using them freely. But, this is when the younger ones in the family should pitch in and educate them about their usage.With each day passing by, the elderly people can improve their grip on the mobile as they learn new things each day, which makes acquiring more knowledge rather user-friendly than complex to them.
- As we acquire more knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious 33
- Some people believe that universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s field of study Others believe that universities should not force students to take any courses other than those that will help prepare the 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
... a specific application operates. These days complexity in life is surging at a trem...
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Line 2, column 654, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...h in and educate them about their usage.With each day passing by, the elderly people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, at least, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 2235.4752809 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08928571429 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74069331966 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.4932671777 130% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1616464042 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137369197199 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493220720345 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627013403369 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108346027551 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00672339544096 0.0667264976115 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.