Knowledge is a most powerful thing that differentiates mankind from other species in the world. With the power of sixth sense, humans acquires more knowledge on worldy things, analyses them thoroughly and applies the gained knowledge on finding solutions for the day-to-day problems or making the problems less complex. Therefore, gaining more knowledge will help the human-kind to untie more complex things.
To begin with, we can analyse different domains in which we, humans, expanded our discoveries and made constant progress over the period. One of the most interesting and mysterious domains is our space which consists of so many conundrums. Half a century ago, we don’t know anything about the black holes and scientists were not able to explain the confounded reactions that had happened in space. After the invention of the black hole concept, scientists followed many researches and derived many theories, which has released more knots in the stars’ behaviours. This is the best examples how we humans operate our knowledge and uses them to polish us in all possible ways. Supporting this theory, humans are keen to find another planet, suitable for human lives, which will help to keep the human-kind survival in case of earth’s deadliest end.
We can’t miss the other important domain in which we always improve our researches and inventions to support human life. Medical developments, indeed, plays a strong role in examining human’s knowledge level. Before the invention of nano technology, the complexity of a heart operation was enormous and the success rate was very low. Even after the ease brought by nano technology, we didn’t stop our researches there. There are plenty of on-going researches and developments over improving human life time. The more we gain knowledge on medical field, we reduces the complexities in human health issues.
Humans have misused our planet’s resources in many way, even though they are the species who can think about the consequences in long term. However, we realised the damages we have made over the time and already started to recover the planet with various healing activities like planting more trees, protecting the water resources, planning for coral lives improvement and disposal of garbages.
To sum up, we learn more from the happenings and improve our actions in coming days. The more we learn, the more we make our lives better by applying the knowledge we gained and we reduce the life complexities. And the thirst to know more is being our key for the improvements we make in our day-to-day lives.
- “Globalization” refers to the growing economic and cultural interconnectedness between different regions of the world. Because modern transportation and electronic communication have made commercial relationships between distant people easier than eve 3
- 'The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.“Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the c 42
- Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote. 73
- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why? 73
- The emperor Claudius of Rome ruled an empire spanning three continents between 41 and 54 CE. His reign was of massive importance to the history of ancient European civilization. In fact, the emperor was among the most innovative, fair, and wise in all Rom 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun way seems to be countable; consider using: 'many ways'.
Suggestion: many ways
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25059665871 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76999589053 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568019093079 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0938987286 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246859933256 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890544223918 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959689160984 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160759675068 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792244514413 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.