The claim Outlines the most valuable lessons are learned from struggling or dealing with failures." success is nothing without failures" one won't be able to enjoy the success without knowing the failures. failure and success are a part of life and everyone needs to deal with them.neverthless how rich you are...
These failures and success teach a lot. basically when you are failing repeatedly or when you are in the worst phase of life.it helps you to think broad your mind and think out of the box in order to get out of the situation. It helps us "how to deal with failures without getting emotional".while success teaches you how to get trained and how to behave even when you are at a high level.it also helps us to know how society works.
to illustrate it I'm providing an example. in my life, I have gone through so many struggles .espically when I'm in my B-Tech final year. during campus recruitment, I have seen my worst phase of life. I used to attend every on-campus drive that came to my college, but I failed to clear them in one or the other round .and I started losing confidence.then my mother motivated me saying "failures are temporary " and motivated me to keep working on my studies. and learning the mistakes from all the interviews that I have attended.i portrayed myself as a hardworking student .and worked on my loopholes and after 2 months of hard work, I got placed in an MNC. and there were no bounds for my happiness.if had placed at the early stages of placements I would have not enjoyed the success in these bounds.
I conclude that it necessary for a person to experience both. " you only need the light when it is burning low " and " only miss the sun when it starts to snow ". similarly, in life, it's both the makes a person perfect
- The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree 33
- We learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations rather than from enjoying our successes.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your posit 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67492260062 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85981652328 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572755417957 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0168068436 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133802021119 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044352153139 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476557326811 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886875058829 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609536287423 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.