“We live under the illusion that we know what we want, when actually we merely want what we are supposed to want.”
The author in the statement asserts that we live in illusion about the things that we want to do. Even I agree with the first part statement that we live illusion that we know what we want. However, I believe the author goes too far, by suggesting that we rarely want what we supposed.
In this progressive and advanced world where we live, we always take various goals to ourselves dream it, but I think it’s a sort of absurd that we are unlikely to know what we want—A believe in the statement that I find troubling in various respects. The reasons to substantiated my view-point are elaborated upon hereunder.
The chief reason I believe we know what we want is that after we take a decision we imagine ourselves in different scenarios. In one we imagine we meet to our goals and imagine what could happen after. In the other one we imagine we fail in reaching and its outcomes. As I do regularly before I want to decide what I supposed to do then based on the judging the risks and outcomes I put a goal for myself. The main reason I think the second part goes a little far in that most of the people frustrating while they try or give up, in better definition some extra things will happen and caused them to change their mind they finally think that the goal they want is far from the things that they want to make. For example, me and one of my close friends decide to pursue our chance in a foreign country for doing our PhD. As we all know there are hundreds of problems that at the beginning we never think about them, so my friend frustrating and give up. Because she changed her goals she start changing her goals and believing that the things that she want to make isn’t the things she supposed to.
Second, It is natural that people change their believes after they fails. I read it in a psychology textbook that people when start to frustrate to achieving to a goal start to changing their believes. I think we all have lots of examples to this behavior and we never could understand it. Take another look to my friend example. At first we said we want to do our PhD in United States of America, Canada, Or Australia. However, after various attempt she couldn’t achieve the minimums of the universities. Therefore, she start changing her believes and goals. Such as she said I think I couldn’t live far from my family or climate is too harsh in Australia. Even though we know them from beginning, she starts to make them highlighted for changing her wants and finally she decide to do her PhD in Turkey, a country nearby the Iran.
In sum, taking aforementioned reasons and examples into account, We all know what we want from the beginning. However, when we frustrating to reaching it we starts to changing our goals and opinions and believing that we make mistake about out goals and things that we want.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...at we are unlikely to know what we want—A believe in the statement that I find troubling ...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... we are unlikely to know what we want—A believe in the statement that I find troubling ...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lieve we know what we want is that after we take a decision we imagine ourselves ...
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Line 5, column 989, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
...e up. Because she changed her goals she start changing her goals and believing that t...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
... It is natural that people change their believes after they fails. I read it in a psycho...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'fail'
Suggestion: fail
...people change their believes after they fails. I read it in a psychology textbook tha...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...eving to a goal start to changing their believes. I think we all have lots of examples t...
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Line 7, column 527, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
...ums of the universities. Therefore, she start changing her believes and goals. Such a...
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Line 7, column 785, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
... for changing her wants and finally she decide to do her PhD in Turkey, a country near...
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Line 7, column 844, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...D in Turkey, a country nearby the Iran. In sum, taking aforementioned reasons an...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
..., when we frustrating to reaching it we starts to changing our goals and opinions and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i suppose, i think, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 113.0 33.0505617978 342% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2338.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52224371373 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5061727684 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413926499033 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1042951767 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5416666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.20833333333 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.540439875631 0.243740707755 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196324383661 0.0831039109588 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17385830721 0.0758088955206 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.419491910937 0.150359130593 279% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118466406799 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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