The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Democracy, equal rights and freedom are the cornerstones of a well functioning society. If people are not opressed but instead are treated equally and their voices are heard, arguably the society has succeeded in its tasks. hence when evaluating the effect of questioning authorities, we must attempt to understand how it affects these key questions.
The immidiate effect of questioning authorities is that it becomes harder for the government to maintain order and to pass their will. In normal circumstances this can seem as a negative outcome, but a moment of thought reveals some important positive aspects as well. For instance, consider an opressive regime or a government that does not have it's citizens needs in first place. Clearly, in such situations not accepting everything by its face value is good, since it provides an additional mechanism of checks and balances for the authorities. On the other hand, excessive suspicion causes unecessary friction and dificulties for the authorities. Therefore, the effect of questioning authorities depends greatly on the context.
Not only does distrust maintain some checks and balances, but high amounts of distrust might cause residents to turn to a charismatic person, causing populism and strong authoritative figures who have excessive power in their hands, infringing on the equality of the people. consider for instance Benjamin natanyahu, Israels prime minister. Gaining an unprecendented support of the citizens of Isreal, natanyahu has exploited his power to manipulate the media and to bend the law to his will. Furthermore, populist leaders can with time turn a democratic state into an opressive regime suited to cater their needs.
when weighting the positive and negative effects of questioning authority, even though a difficult task, it seems that believing in ones state has less risks and harms than benefits. hence, I believe that distrust does not pay off, and in the long run the society will be better with trust to authority.
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- The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38170347003 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92193610389 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2657458476 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123729031331 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406882676817 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254598464771 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780363502183 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368050729142 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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