"The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority."
we live in a society where progress depends on entirely on authorities and the decisions they make. Questioning and correcting their decisions should be done by people without hesitation as later will be suffered by the people itself if anything goes wrong. Thus, As prompt says questioning the authority plays the prominent role in enhancing the well being of the society is true in my opinion, that is I totally agree with what prompt suggests for the following reasons.
To begin, the authorities mostly make decisions based on their preceptive which is beyond reach of the common people preceptive which apparently occurs differences between what people really need and what authority provides .perhaps,the authority provides what people donot need at all and doesnot know and provides what they actually need.For instance,the authority provides unessential things say cellphone towers and roads rather than essential problem of nonavailability of drinking water in a community.The above example illustrates that sometimes most of the authority takes imperfect decisions the only way to solve the issue is questioning them and getting what they really need which enchance their life.
second of all,the repulsive force should be there in order to put the authority in the correct track.people need to question when authority deliberately frauds or scams them.For instance,authority may fall to money they haven't seen before and loot people to core.The authority may scam money and put various taxes on people and also increase the prices of various products which directly put huge burden on common people.So,not questioning the authority in such cases will not only trouble their enhancement but also make them to fall into deeper backward life.
Furthur,questioning make people unity and make changes rapidly and fasten the growth of people.Moreover,by unity, even the impossible things can make it possible with excellence.For example,In a community there are two different groups with difference between them for long years but common problem with authority decision has made them to be one and solve the things faster than excepted.furthur,they even sove issues that are impossible.so questioning also make people together and enchance their life.
some say that questioning is waste of time as the entire power is in the hands of authority but they donot think of consequences of future if questioning is stopped things get worsen too with authority.furthur,questioning is never a waste of time it brings people together and has the power to put authority down.so,questioning the authority truely enchances the well-being of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, thus, well, even so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2250.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48780487805 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34116074826 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 23.0359550562 252% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.247448964 60.3974514979 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 321.428571429 118.986275619 270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.5714285714 23.4991977007 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.21951772744 364% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324993867436 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173270987019 0.0831039109588 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595782213301 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200463318851 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872889127586 0.0667264976115 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 14.1392134831 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 48.8420337079 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 12.1743820225 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.45 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 11.2143820225 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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