The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The well-being of a society is very important for it's development and it's people. All the developed and successful societies of the world prioritize well-being over all other things. The well-being depends on many factors like the people in the nation, their income, job, education, physical and mental health and most importantly the Government authorities. All these factors play an equal role in maintaining well-being but I agree with the statement that it is enhanced when the citizens question the authority. Because higher authorities control each and every domain of a country as it has influence and dominance over everything.
For example, the Nirbahya rape case in Delhi India caused an atmosphere of fear in the entire country and the Goverment was reluctant in hanging the culprits. but the people stood up against the authority and questioned it till the court sentenced the rapists to death. it helped in mitigating the fear among people and reduced such rape cases in the country to a huge extent. Also few years ago, fee was increased in many Indian colleges, so the students went on hunger stikes and staged many protestes to get rid of this unwanted situation. Finally they were successful and authorities were forced to normalize the fee. it helped many students who belonged to poor families in persuing the degrees that they wanted to.
If we go back to the history, we can find a lot of examples about people standing up against the different atrocious rulers and ending up achieving freedom from all their atrocities. Nelson Mandela fought against apartheid for a long time and then was sucessful in obtaining equal rights for black people as were given to white people. Hence questioning authorities is very important for achieving harmony and well being in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 296.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06756756757 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70967849758 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8155489542 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214070922762 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745373542935 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617245726745 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136435885572 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682033700351 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.