Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given is a map of Brandfield city illustrating the probable sits of one new shopping mall in the relation to various different zones as well as major transportation links.
It is clear to see that the two sites under consideration are in the north and the south east of the town, which were entirely cut by a rainway and road system.
The first possible site for the shoppong mall, S1, is just north of the city center. Be placed in this area which is next to a large houding estate, the shopping mall will provide easy acces...
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Sentence: Be placed in this area which is next to a large houding estate, the shopping mall will provide easy access for this residental area and those living in the city centre.
Error: houding Suggestion: ?
Sentence: This may be a stumbling block for the convinience to customers of this situation.
Error: convinience Suggestion: convenience
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