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A glance at the bar chart reveals the shopping habits of consumer items in 4 different nations, namely Belgium, Spain, Britain and Austria in 2012
It is clear to see that the expenditure in Britain was by far highest in all type of products whereas 3 remaining countries have different speading on each consumer goods.
To be more specific, the figures for Britain in cameras and toys were 170 and 167 thousand pound respectively, which outperformed that of Belgium as well as Spain. Console game and outdoor game accessories seemed to be less preferedd by Briton with well over 155.000 pounds.
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Sentence: It is clear to see that the expenditure in Britain was by far highest in all type of products whereas 3 remaining countries have different speading on each consumer goods.
Error: speading Suggestion: spending
Sentence: Console game and outdoor game accessories seemed to be less preferedd by Briton with well over 155.000 pounds.
Error: preferedd Suggestion: preferred
Sentence: By star contrast, Belgium had the smallest expenditure in most comsumer goods, with merely 147 thousand pound in cosmetics and 144 thousand pound in books, which is much lower than that of Spain with 150000 pound in the former items and 154 thousand pounds in the later goods.
Error: comsumer Suggestion: consumer
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