Billions of dollars are spent on beauty business by people all over the world. This has led to develop an indifferent and passive attitude to real health needs. Do you agree or disagree with it?

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Billions of dollars are spent on beauty business by people all over the world. This has led to develop an indifferent and passive attitude to real health needs. Do you agree or disagree with it?

People can realize that nowadays the cultivation of this era has been growing up. I will fetch one example in health side to conclude that I agree with the following statement.

Health is one thing which people cannot guarantee to guard it, but people can warrant their health longer than people who did not think health is important. And now, people may see that most teenagers perceive comeliness is the necessary thing in health side. They notice that mostly in television and magazine. Perceptions of to be beauty are white skin, big eyes, shape lips, and slim thighs. Myriad girls opt to modif...

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Sentence: As we know that is spend much money to be a perfect.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and spend

Sentence: Several countries support this perception which builds beauty center such plastic surgery and cosmetics. The information of social media create eyesight of sublimity is revamp in physical form.
Suggestion: Several countries support this perception which builds beauty center such as plastic surgery and cosmetics. The information of social media which create eyesight of sublimity is revamp in physical form.

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Avg. Sentence Length: 14.87 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.016 7.5
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.045 0.07

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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