The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart indicates total time duration of cal made in three different ways in UK between 1995 and 2002. Generally, patterns for cellphones and national or international-fixed line present a significant change during 7 years. While, local-fixed line figure indicates a sigmoidal pattern during this period.
In comparison, minutes of making local contacts by fixed line had the highest rate. In contrast, time duration for mobile phones remained the lowest during 1995 and 2002. Moreover, nation...
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