Counties such as China, India and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet.
Give some suggestions to address this problem.
Based on the research conducted by experts on population growth in countries like China, India and Japan. These over growth in population is turning into a serious concern and threat to all. So let us discuss mainly the reasons behind this problem and try suggesting the best available approach to encounter this situation.
Firstly, as the technology advanced with population growth, Use of computers in industries and factories has decreased the use of man power for work. Hence the number of job opportunities are decreased. Thus people already working will soon be unemployed and the count further increases. Which will provoke people to indulge into serious criminal activities like robbery of bank ATM's and sometimes murder while snatching valuables from other people. In order to avoid these kind of scenarios, government should take proper measures to address unemployment. For example, create more jobs by collecting more tax from business owners, high salaried people and factory owners.
Secondly, country is facing major shortage in food due to no proper rain and humans greed towards making more money by selling farmland as plots to build houses and flats. Which is in turn creating a shortage in food grains and vegetables for consumption. These could lead people suffering from hunger to attack rich and wealthy people for money and food. Which is considered to be a serious threat to all. To overcome this threat government should enforce a strict rule not to sell farmland and encourage farmers in growing large quantity by offering discount.
Finally, government should work rigorously in controlling population by creating awareness amongst people about family planning and prompt that small family is a happy family. Which in turn suggests that only one or two kids are allowed per family.
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