The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares the arrival of tourists to five different destinations between 1995 and 2010.
It is clearly indicated by the chart that there was an upward trend in tourist arrival to all five countries. That tendency is more significant in France than elsewhere. In fact, the number of tourist visited to France increased dramatically from 30 million in 1995 and to about 88 millions in 2010.
In 1995, the USA was the most popular destination with 70 million of tourist arrivals. Although this figure rose further to approximately 90 million in 2005 there was a slight reduction during the next five years of period. By 2010, the number of tourist visit to the USA and France became some. Moreover, Malaysia remained as the third most popular country as a tourist destination over the fifteen years of period. They also received about 20 million more tourists in 2010 than in the beginning of the period.
Despite the fat that Brazil and Egypt were the countries with lowest tourist arrival they also show a slight upward trend in this figure by the end of the period.
To sum up, there was an obvious growth in tourist industry over the fifteen years of period. This growth is more dramatic and significant in France.
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