The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to raise the age limit for younger drivers and to lower the age limit for the aged ones. Do you agree?
There has been a dramatic increase in the number of road traffic accidents over the past few decades. Obviously, this tendency is more common among young and elderly drivers. Thus, some people are of the view that the best way to alleviate such problem is to raise the age limit for younger ones and to lower the age limit for the elderly drivers. In my opinion, this is neither practical nor effective solution. Instead, these are a number of other important measures that need to be taken to control such trend.
On the one hand, young drivers have natural inclination to be violent and drive wit...
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Sentence: In my opinion, this is neither practical nor effective solution.
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