Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?
The world is switching swiftly into a machinery system. Population also, is growing fast along with that. Nowadays, almost every individual owns a car and this has led to traffic digests and subsequently air pollution. Some people believe that increasing the price of petrol can be an effective way to overcome this problem. In my view this can be an efficient policy along with alarming people about the catastrophic consequences of using cars.
To commence with, technological advances have come to facilitate our lives. Accordingly, people’s expectations have risen. In other words, one tends ...
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Sentence: Furthermore, authorities should aware citizens of health problems followed by the air pollution.
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