The international tourism has become cheaper and cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to welcome more tourist. Do the advantages of the international tourism out weight its disadvantages?
In the 21st century, economically airlines are growing faster, they provide many destinations with best offer. Air Asia Airlines is one of popular airlines which provide low cost for visiting across more than three continents. It gives big contribution which is developing International tourism. Some people believe that the phenomenon gives possibility for travelers to visit abroad with low budget and it increases income from each country from tourism sector. Nevertheless, tourists will give an attraction for tourism environment. I would argue that economically journey influence International tourism and develop income to country, aerospace industry and tourism place.
There are many beautiful tourism places in the world where each county has the well-known area to persuade people visiting there. Nowadays, every county has official website to introduce popular tourism places, because of that people easy find information about the beautiful place with spectacular scenery. Base on the research of International tourism forum shows information which is tourisms’ keen on visit abroad year-by-year. As a result, governments and aerospace industry realize about market demand for getting income and developing service in tourism. Because of that, many airlines industries appear with low cost carrier to influence visitors using their service to increase income. Air Asia Airlines, for example, always provide promotion as the best offer with cheaper cost which mean that is the best way to collect many passengers and the income rise. Moreover, each country also takes a lots of benefit, for example, each tourist has to pay retribution when visitor visit in a tourism area and pay tax when people arrive in this country. Travelers equally take many advantage, there are trip abroad with economically budget and people can learn about culture from other country.
On the other hand, flight duration rise which means that smoke from airplane increase pollution in air environment and also flight uses lots of fuel which cause of climate change. Further, only fewer travelers have awareness about maintaining the tourism environment. Visitors, for example, litter everywhere although in tourism area has recycle bin. Then governments tend in one side which develop tourism place with many public facilities that is money expectation. There is more becoming cottages and cafes, so nature environment lose and time-by-time the area is damage.
Finally, according to income statement of Air Asia Airlines shows that income of Air Asia Airlines has risen since more than 10 years ago. However, Indonesia tourism forum release a report which almost 80% of tourism places have been damage. As a result, Elka Pangestu as Minister of tourism develops a regulation to maintain tourism areas and reduce main problem of damaging environment in Indonesia tourism areas.
To put them in a nutshell, I think that governments play an essential role to restrict about exploration of tourism area and also make regulation to control a number of tourists. As a result, governments can control between income and effect from tourism sector.
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