The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The invention of internet has bought significant changes to our lives, and it would be completely different from last 30 years. Many other important inventions launched in the 21st century, such as mobile internet. Every time you need, then you can use mobile internet for your activities, jobs or duties by your cell phone. It does not make the sameness rather than before, because mobile internet makes lots of activities to do.
At the moment mobile internet is the one of important inventions. Especially for woman, they can use mobile internet with plenty advantages like easy to shop online. So they just connect their cell phone to mobile internet and they can buy something, such as: clothes, stuff, make up, groceries and great food in their home. It is easy to connect mobile internet to get what we need.
On the other hand, the mobile internet can make inhabitants connected to their relative around the world. Citizens can utilize the great feature in the mobile internet social media such as: Facebook, Twitter, Whatsapp, and Tumblr. These make easy to know condition of their old friends and get new friends. So, they can always keep in touch and build relationship one another.
However, inhabitants do not have the sameness with the last 30 years. Nowadays some people are busy with their mobile internet, playing social media with a cellphone in hand. As a result, they do not have friends. Also, mobile internet has a negative impact such as: porn website and high cybercrime.
In the nutshell, I believe our lives are extremely different since this significant invention is discovered, which has a negative effect.
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