It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.
Agreeing with the statement that it is difficult to live a happy and prosperous life without any interference of media in our lives .Its more common to perform an act which is done by our favorite media star than to do something by your own.Communication is the basic need of every one to get connected with their family,friends,society or even with people who live far away in other countries .
Nowadays,communication has given another name that is called media,from newspaper,radio to internet, television. All are the manipulative types of media source which allow us to communicate with each other.Most successful means of communication through media are internet and mobiles which influence us more than others.
Generally,Psychologists have the point of view that exorbitance use of Internet has lots of afflicts on brain and young generation is becoming addicted to it.Youngsters use them arbitary in skilful way as they feel superior by chatting and surfing online around the world and they also urge others to accompanying them ,thus increasing its popularity instantly.
One of the drawback of media is that these young people feel like lonely when they don't have their laptops and mobiles on their hand and this leads to notice unconventional behaviour with negligent towards studies in them and they are apt to take any action and do anything to meet their daily requirement.
Although, It seems precisely fair to assume that we cannot eliminate media's influence overhead and i personally believe that the progress happened recently is the virtual example of media usage,Though,its encroaching in ours lives we just cannot defiance it .
Moreover,It is paradoxical thing for our society and we should be aware about drawbacks of media on us and firmly must know how much it can get over us as a result we must control it.
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Sentence: Youngsters use them arbitary in skilful way as they feel superior by chatting and surfing online around the world and they also urge others to accompanying them ,thus increasing its popularity instantly.
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