It is generally agreed that society from the work of its compare the contribution of an artists with that of scientist to society.
It is a controversial question, whether the contribution of artist are more or less the contributions of scientists to the society. For several reasons, I believed that both groups are valuable, priceless and irreplaceable for every society.
The contributions of artists to the society are very essential. It is true that, art nourishes our souls, makes our mental lives diversified and we become healthier. Art forms allow people to express themselves and make others to think. Besides, art can form person’s spiritual sense, views and their personalities. People learn history and the traditi...
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